研究了500篇中考英語滿分作文, 總結出一份高分技巧(2)

　　（三）組織結構（滿分4）

　　內容充實，上下文連貫，用語規范，表達準確，無語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語者，可給3-4分。

　　內容充實，不寫廢話，上下文連貫，用語規范，表達準確，無或少見語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語者，可給2分。

　　一般情況下，內容和語言累計得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結構分。

　　內容和語言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達，可酌情考慮給1分組織結構分。

　　通篇句型句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，一般也不予給組織結構分。

　　分類作文提綱

　　一、活動介紹類

　　首段：

　　(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.

　　(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.

　　(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.

　　主體段：

　　1.時間&地點：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.

　　2.內容：

　　(1)主題句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it.

　　(2)要點:First of all，You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...

　　After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ...   so that ...

　　At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...

　　尾段：

　　That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .

　　That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.

　　二、寫人敘事類

　　首段：

　　(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.

　　(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .

　　(3) 老師：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.

　　主體段：

　　1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.

　　2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.

　　3.愛好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.

　　4.事例：

　　（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.

　�。�2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.

　�。�3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.

　　尾段：

　　As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.

　　Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.

　　He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.

　　三、咨詢建議類

　　首段：

　　I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Don’t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you.

　　主體段：

　　1.主題句：Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.

　　2.要點：

　　First and foremost,It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ... .So that...

　　In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...

　　What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...

　　Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ...

　　尾段：

　　With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.

　　I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.

　　四、觀點看法類

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